Recording and Mixing Dates: Recorded and Mixed January 19, 2016
Genesis: The song came to me quite quickly on March 28, 2010. For some time I had been thinking about a song built upon “the tell”: the way good poker players can spot non-verbal cues and patterns in their opponents and use these to their advantage. I wanted to generalize the “tell” to everyday interactions. On that March afternoon I picked up a guitar and started strumming G and C chords. I got the back-and-forth changes clicking, moved to a D chord, and then came up with the refrain that ends each verse. I recorded a demo to my iPhone voice memo app, hence my certainty in dating the origin of the song. In the course of playing the tune, I sang “dummy lyrics,” placeholders that captured the melody. As sometimes happens, a number of these words, including the refrain, survived the more formal lyric-writing process.
I put the song aside (a familiar tell for me) until November 4, 2014. On that day I completed the four verses. As I prepared to arrange and record the song this week, I revised several lines.
I decided to go for a smooth sound this week using acoustic instruments. Everything clicked immediately. I have already realized that recording on a regular basis has speeded up my workflow considerably.
Production: Acoustic bass, brush drums, dobro, National wood-body resonator guitar, mandolin.
THE TELL
You’re one of those people
Who wears her heart on her sleeve
I can see what you’re thinking
And what you believe
You know that I’m different
I play it close to the vest
But gamblers will tell you
I’m like all the rest
REFRAIN:
You want to know what I’m feeling
You want to know me so well
Better look for The Tell
Look for The Tell
So act like a card shark
Note all that you see
Start looking for patterns
Till you lock down the key
It could be a gesture
A look or a cough
It might be bravado
That’s a little bit off
REFRAIN
Yes, I’ve got a story
That’s never been told
I keep it within me
I never let it unfold
It’s a story about winning
A story about loss
A story about a river
That I’ll never cross
REFRAIN
Take a look at me, baby
It’s all there to see
It’s been hiding in plain sight
‘Neath a flashing marquee
In time you should find it
And figure me out
But even at that point
You’re gonna harbor some doubt
REFRAIN
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Good, different. My only change would be to cut out the refrain after every verse
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Fine song, Fred, I like it right well the way it is. Excellent arrangement and playing. An unobtrusive bass-barytone background vocal for the choruses (starting on the second one) might be available. In other words, I hummed along happily when I listened the second time.
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